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raccoon

hi my name is Jeff and i’m a raccoon of climbing a tree. l came down like a bum and a bunch of leaves came from the sky and landed on top of me. l’ve got a leaf and flew to the Australia zoo.  I saw another raccoon and his name was Jake, it was at 2 o’clock in the day. After 2 o’clock we went for a walk and we got court and went to the vet. We got let out to the wild and we got sum food to eat. We found another raccoon and his name was Jack and we got more food.

One Reply to “raccoon”

  1. Mrs Pratt

    Hey Tyler,

    I loved the part where the leaves landed on top of the raccoon, that was a great description that got me imagining the action, well done! Great job including all of the prompt words. I look forward to reading your next piece!

    🙂

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